Personal Anecdote v Facts to Offer More Reliable Proof
Obviously, when you use a personal experience to support something you
want to argue, you must realize that your experience doesn't necessarily
"prove" something; it merely illustrates.
For example, if you write about homework usefulness in K-12, you will
state your position, and then probably use your own and/or friends'
experiences to back up your position.
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Note below how the use of facts has more weight; they tend to offer a
kind of "proof" that's more reliable.
This is about the journalist Jack Kelley from USA TODAY who was fired
for plagiarism and fabrication.
The team's initial investigation showed Kelley had made up
substantial portions of at least eight stories. The team considered a story
fabricated if expense reports, phone records, official documents or
witnesses clearly contradicted all or parts of what was
published.
The subsequent review shows that substantial parts of at least
11 others, including most of Kelley's many notable stories, are simply
untrue. Among them: Kelley's accounts that he found diaries alongside the corpses of
Iraqi soldiers in 1991; traveled to a village in Somalia in 1992;
discovered matches made from napalm that could burn through glass ashtrays
in 1993; trekked into the mountains of Yugoslavia with the Kosovo
Liberation Army in 1999; listened to a tape that captured the downing of a
missionary flight over Peru in 2000; visited with Elian Gonzalez's father
inside the father's house in Cuba in 2000; visited Osama bin Laden's terrorist camps
in Afghanistan in 2001; and spent time near the cave complexes of Tora
Bora in 2001.
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Quoting research summaries or using graphs and charts from reliable
studies to substantiate your claims are other ways of offering more
"proof" for your position.
A study by the Census Bureau Society of Actuaries, which looked
at life insurance mortality rates to show the probability of death within
a year for people 90 years old, documented a decrease from 28 % in 1941 to 12.2%
in 2001, indicating a significant increase in longevity for today's
elderly population. This, in turn, has a profound effect on the demand
for geriatric health care services.